Well, I'm glad you were my editor; I never got notified of your first comment and only saw it this morning!

Stunned by the frankness was certainly one of my goals in this poem! Good to know it's working, hahaha. A lot of people seem to be finding themselves in it, too, which is nice. I mean, um, oh, you know.

You are a flatterer, that's what you are! *points accusingly* You flatter!

(And for some reason, that one line from La Vie Boheme (from Rent) is stuck in my head. "To being an us for once instead of a them!")