http://writingmoments.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] writingmoments.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] 1stmate 2012-07-10 08:58 pm (UTC)

::hugs:: I think all couples have regrets, whether they stay together or not. If this is real life, I'm sad this happened. You have become a wonderful writer though!

This line especially grabbed me:

but the air
is a jumble of broken promises and regret.

I wish I could write poetry like this! Great job!

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