Oh dear me. How could I be? I've read over and over again, and I really can't find anything to EDIT! Perhaps I am stunned by the frankness of the statements. Perhaps I find myself inside the poem as if it is I who is speaking it.
Perhaps I am not divorced enough from the subject to be able to be 'impervious' or 'imperial'.
Certainly I can find no problems with your punctuation (but I would admit I am not the best at that myself!) Your grammar is - what's wrong with it? Nothing that I can see. Not even a typo! The subject matter I have expounded at length upon. (I STILL say it is superb and wonderful and it should and will walk the comp this week!)
Erm, I'm a lousy editor... LOUSY... but a fervent admirer of your writing. (Can I be asked to 'edit' something less perfect next time please?)
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Date: 2012-09-13 08:24 am (UTC)Oh dear me. How could I be? I've read over and over again, and I really can't find anything to EDIT! Perhaps I am stunned by the frankness of the statements. Perhaps I find myself inside the poem as if it is I who is speaking it.
Perhaps I am not divorced enough from the subject to be able to be 'impervious' or 'imperial'.
Certainly I can find no problems with your punctuation (but I would admit I am not the best at that myself!) Your grammar is - what's wrong with it? Nothing that I can see. Not even a typo! The subject matter I have expounded at length upon. (I STILL say it is superb and wonderful and it should and will walk the comp this week!)
Erm, I'm a lousy editor... LOUSY... but a fervent admirer of your writing. (Can I be asked to 'edit' something less perfect next time please?)
Duff Editor Blue. XX